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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 3:25:45 GMT
Prologue Part 1
The world opened up to a blinding plethora of colors. Violent flashes of yellow raced through the air. Large blurs of Silver constantly spewing forth those yellow flashes as they raced across the air to strike large dull shapes. Then the world slowly began to focus within his vision. The ground around him was littered with the silver blurs now identifiable as tall metal creatures with long necks and a set of curved horns. His eyes lazily scanned the battlefield now easily much more identifiable with his vision restored he proceeded to stand up to assess this situation he has found himself in.
The rags he found himself in held no value seeing as they were torn and dirty but from what he couldn’t tell. From there he turned to gaze at the area that was now identified as a battlefield. The area was covered in the silver creatures with large weapons of all sorts fighting the now identified Dull colored shapes as immense creatures their body color the same shade of brown as the ground beneath him. They were reptilian in form their bodies covered in scales that had patches of scaleless flesh that were oozing out what could possibly be the large creatures blood. But of that he was uncertain.
Then he noticed that one of the large creatures begin to spew flames at a group of the silver creatures. The beast’s flames consumed the silver creatures in the flames and within seconds melted them to nothing but ash. His mind began to calculate the possibilities of joining the battle on either side. ‘The Silver Creatures seem to be losing dozens for every large creature they take down….This leaves the possibility of trust and possible answers to where I am and what is this place….The logic is sound commencing actions. ‘
As he completed his calculations he stood ready to begin his own attack. His eyes though looked to the ground seeing an all black sword with red stripes it’s point impaled into the ground seemingly awaiting for him to wield it. He found that his pale hand already in the process of grabbing the sword and completed the action by wrapping his hand around the hilt. The sword releasing a pulse of red energy as he completely enveloped the grip in his hand.
His dingy tattered brown robes slightly fluttered in the wind as his heterochromatic eyes systematically pinpointed the best target to take down first. The nearest creature was swatting aside several of the Silver creatures as they surrounded and pelted it with attacks. His newly claimed sword in hand he placed his other hand upon the hilt and began to charge the large creature. 'Initiating Combat.'
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Post by CosmicBehemoth on May 18, 2014 3:39:37 GMT
Hm, is it an original product of yours, or of an existing franchise?
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 3:42:46 GMT
Hm, is it an original product of yours, or of an existing franchise? Character is original but multiple franchises will be included. I'm just now going to patiently wait and see if anyone catches them before they're revealed. I'm going to continue extending the prologue until I feel it is reasonably long.
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Post by Knukails on May 18, 2014 3:44:50 GMT
Kingdom hearts?
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 3:46:08 GMT
Hi knuks and that's going to be incorporated later.
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Post by CosmicBehemoth on May 18, 2014 3:50:42 GMT
Any particular reason heterochromia came up?
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 3:52:56 GMT
Any particular reason heterochromia came up? Hmm well..honestly...No real reason just wanted to add that minuscule detail for future reference. Will add more on it later. Once I properly detail them some revelations will come to light.
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Post by CosmicBehemoth on May 18, 2014 3:56:31 GMT
Okay.
Well as of yet, there's really not much to say. You mentioned having more planned, so I'll probably be able to give more thoughts then.
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Post by Knukails on May 18, 2014 4:00:57 GMT
^ Same
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 4:15:37 GMT
K almost well I think almost done with the new extension I added give me another 10 minutes
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 5:50:43 GMT
The world opened up to a blinding plethora of colors. Violent flashes of yellow raced through the air. Large blurs of Silver constantly spewing forth those yellow flashes as they raced across the air to strike large dull shapes. Then the world slowly began to focus within his vision. The ground around him was littered with the silver blurs now identifiable as tall metal creatures with long necks and a set of curved horns. His eyes lazily scanned the battlefield now easily much more identifiable with his vision restored he proceeded to stand up to assess this situation he has found himself in.
The rags he found himself in held no value seeing as they were torn and dirty but from what he couldn’t tell. From there he turned to gaze at the area that was now identified as a battlefield. The area was covered in the silver creatures with large weapons of all sorts fighting the now identified Dull colored shapes as immense creatures their body color the same shade of brown as the ground beneath him. They were reptilian in form their bodies covered in scales that had patches of scaleless flesh that were oozing out what could possibly be the large creatures blood. But of that he was uncertain.
Then he noticed that one of the large creatures begin to spew flames at a group of the silver creatures. The beast’s flames consumed the silver creatures in the flames and within seconds melted them to nothing but ash. His mind began to calculate the possibilities of joining the battle on either side. ‘The Silver Creatures seem to be losing dozens for every large creature they take down….This leaves the possibility of trust and possible answers to where I am and what is this place….The logic is sound commencing actions. ‘
As he completed his calculations he stood ready to begin his own attack. His eyes though looked to the ground seeing an all black sword with red stripes it’s point impaled into the ground seemingly awaiting for him to wield it. He found that his pale hand already in the process of grabbing the sword and completed the action by wrapping his hand around the hilt. The sword releasing a pulse of red energy as he completely enveloped the grip in his hand.
His dingy tattered brown robes slightly fluttered in the wind as his heterochromatic eyes systematically pinpointed the best target to take down first. The nearest creature was swatting aside several of the Silver creatures as they surrounded and pelted it with attacks. His newly claimed sword in hand he placed his other hand upon the hilt and began to charge. ‘Initiating Combat.’
His charge went unnoticed by both sides he took this chance to launch a preemptive strike. His feet pounded as the ground as he slipped through the silver creatures ranks to strike at the beast as it was occupied with silver creatures on another side of it. He reached the base of it’s body and leaped from the ground easily clearing two dozen feet to successfully land on the creatures back and quickly scanning it’s back for weak points. The creature took notice of it’s new rider and bellowed in annoyance at the insect that stood upon it. The warrior ignored the bellow and continued to scan for weak points his eyes locked upon one certain point.
It was near the head specifically the back of the head he noticed that the beast began to shake it’s body in an attempt to knock him off. He had no way of keeping himself steady so his body began to slip off the beast but not before he could take leverage with another weak point which was directly on the right side of the beast. He impaled his sword into the beast’s hide at the weak point invoking a screech of pain at the strike on the tender area as it doubled its efforts to knock him off. His efforts to slay the beast weren’t unnoticed by the silver creatures as they doubled their efforts as well to bring down the large creature as the rest of the battlefield raged on. With his sword secured in the beast’s hide his eyes scanned for more weak points which he could take advantage of.
He located one other weak point in the beast’s hide. A rather large one at that a large wound with several arrows snuggled inside the wound. A wound he would take advantage of if given the opportunity. An opportunity the Silver Creatures seemed to be willing to give. Several of the Silver Creatures with large greatswords charged forward and began to hack and slash at the beast’s hide getting the beast’s attention as it began to take swipes at the pesky ants that attacked it.
The warrior now forgotten by the beast could now continue his attack uninhibited. He planted his feet firmly on it’s side as he prepared to leap to the large wound to reach his target. Sword firm in his grasp he pushed off the beast’s side towards the large wound. His sword in hand as it left it’s fleshy sheath, his leap unnoticed by the beast due to the silver creatures efforts to distract it succeeding. He almost didn’t make it to the wound barely reaching the edge before latching on to a large metal arrow and impaling his sword once more into the beast’s side deeper than before. The creature cried out in pain once more at the warrior’s attack and quickly began to spew flames once more incinerating several more of the silver creatures.
The warrior knew his window was closing quickly seeing at the thinning group of silver creatures attacking the large beast. he quickly leaped once more except this time into the air above the creature. His eyes scanned at the battlegrounds beneath him. He was sufficiently high in the air for his plan to work. Gravity soon began to take effect and he began to fall once more to the ground. He began to straighten himself out robes flowing through the wind as he free fell his sword in both hands as he placed it point first towards his now vulnerable target. ‘Target locked.’
His whole body was aimed at the weak point at the back of the head. The speed and velocity he was falling from would be sufficient force to cut through the beast’s weak point at the back of it’s head and kill it in one strike. He no longer had no control at the speed he was going and gravity was in complete control of his fall. There was a sharp whistle as he neared his target. The beast seemed to notice and looked up to identify the noise.
The beast bellowed in anger and opened its jaws wide to devour the warrior. The Warrior simply did minute changes to his plan proceeded onwards with his plan. The beast seemingly content on just leaving it’s razor sharp toothed maw open to devour him whole. ‘A grave mistake.’ The warrior admitted in his mind. With that he reached the beast’s maw he simply stayed in position and entered the beast's maw.
The beast’s jaws snapped shut mere seconds after the ant entered its maw…..Only seconds later a sword to cut open it’s throat from the inside of its body. The warrior now drenched in the beast’s blood quickly grabbing one of the flaps that used to cover the beast’s throat to slow himself down more and in the process ripping the majority of that flap to be torn off as the warrior landed with a loud thud on his feet. The creature’s now cut throat unleashing gallons of blood as the beast futilely attempted to cover the wound. The beast merely fell over on to its side glaring at the one that slayed it.
The Warrior stared back at the dying creature with apathy as the light left it’s eyes. The creature was dead and the remaining silver creatures looked to the warrior and began to surround him though they sheathed their weapons seeing that they fought a common enemy. The Warrior was about to speak before something strange happened. A white aura began to glow around the creature’s body as the white aura began to leave the beast’s corpse it was quickly yanked towards the Warrior’s sword as it pulsated with red energy. The white aura quickly entered the sword and the sword pulsated once more before it went inert once more.
The warrior gazed another second at the sword in his hand before turning his gaze towards the silver creatures once more. The battle seemed to be over as the rest of the large creatures were dead across the battlefield. “Seeing as how i’ve eliminated one of your enemies I am to assume that you will hopefully be cooperative with assisting my query.”
The warrior spoke for the first time in the presence of the silver creatures ignoring his blood drenched cloak to the more pressing objective. As the silver creatures turned as the one to point at an approaching figure. This figure was larger than the silver creatures by a foot or so wielding a lance that was as long as the incoming figure in it’s hand.
The figure could now be identified as it was within speaking distance. The figure was adorned in golden armor with it’s most noticeable feature being a snarling lions face where the face should be and a large red plumage on top of the head. The figure stopped several feet before the group of silver creatures. The silver creatures bowed in unison before the golden armored individual. The Individual raised their lance to point at the Warrior.
“Who are you mortal? It is clear you killed that dragon seeing as how the Knight’s of my Lord haven’t killed you yet and that you're covered in the infernal beasts blood.” The Warrior responded in kind. “Seeing as how you are what appears to be a commander of these silver knights and you speak of a Lord I request you to take me to your leader perhaps an equivalent exchange can be reached.”
The golden commander didn’t respond for several moments. “Very Well. I shall take you to my lord know this if you attempt to attack my Lord I shall be forced to kill you.” The Warrior nodded in agreement. An accord was made so the Golden commander, The Warrior and the silver knights began their trek towards the rest of the congregating forces of this mysterious lord. The party was silent as they continued their march.
The march was short as the silver knights left to rejoin the rest of their forces only the Golden Commander and The Warrior remained. They walked unopposed through the forces of this lord. ‘This commander must be rather high-ranked possibly this Lord’s best seeing as how these forces bow as we pass.’ The walk as was the march was silent before the Commander broke the silence. “We have arrived at my Lord’s Tent show my Lord proper respect and we can begin negotiations.”
The Warrior gazed at the Colossal tent before the Commander ushered him in. There standing before a giant table with three individuals behind him and three other entities surrounding the giant table. The Warrior locked his gaze at the largest figure. An Albino dragon that appeared to not have any eyes, scales, and instead of legs there were two tentacle like appendages. The next was a large but smaller than the dragon a congregation of dozens of what The Warrior looked to be skeletons blanketed in a giant black cloak and not possessing any legs of any shape or form.
The Third figure was rather small but held an aura of power nonetheless. It was a woman with her head draped in a hood hiding her features. Then the final figure that what the Warrior assumed to be the Commander’s lord. A Large man with a long grey hair and beard. A rather large crown was adorned his head.
The man was wearing clothing designed for royalty. By his side was a sheath holding a sword what kind of sword the Warrior couldn’t tell. But the Lord seemed to have noticed the Warrior that was standing before him his Commander entering before bowing to him. “My Lord this warrior I have brought before you has slain a dragon and wished to speak with you.” The Lord and the other figures turned their attention fully towards the Warrior.
The Lord spoke his voice reverberating power. “So...Warrior who are you and what do you seek from us? Surely you haven’t come to help my our cause for the greater good?” The Warrior locked his Golden and Teal eyes with the Lord. “My name...is Exoba Zelraiya and I must know where I am and what is going on here?” The Lord responded in kind “Seeing as how you have aided us though minutely I see no reason to compensate you for your actions. I am Lord Gwyn, The Lord of Sunlight. This is Lordran and we are fighting the Dragons to bring Lordran into a new age.”
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 5:51:08 GMT
Updated Prologue thoughts?
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Post by MugiwaraBlair on May 18, 2014 6:20:26 GMT
There's some redundancy and faulty grammar
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Post by Zeritia on May 18, 2014 6:27:15 GMT
There's some redundancy and faulty grammar Redundancy is there probably because too tired and grammar I can fix later this morning after I get some sleep. Besides that night.
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Post by MugiwaraBlair on May 18, 2014 8:17:00 GMT
Ya nothing big
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